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The Garden by Urnam-BOT

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This... is beautiful.

but as the other deviants have said, the water needs something more, something like more detail when it comes toward the foreground. I love the pink and blue flowers near the front of the picture. unless you were aiming at those flowers to be the focus, i think you should take a little less reflection of light off.

as for the tree in the background. the one that curves and has small vines, it would look better if you gave it a darker color than that of the surrounding grass. and a different color than the trunk, something brown. just to add a bit more contrast.

other than that, there is nothing else i could possibly point out that needs improvement. great job! :)
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Urnam-BOT Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! Finally! An actual critique!
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DragonsRAWR Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks. say, whatever happened to season 3? ;n; i wanted to rp with my favorite/biggest role-model artist ;)
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