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The Garden by Urnam-BOT

This... is beautiful.

but as the other deviants have said, the water needs something more, something like more detail when it comes toward the foreground. I love the pink and blue flowers near the front of the picture. unless you were aiming at those flowers to be the focus, i think you should take a little less reflection of light off.

as for the tree in the background. the one that curves and has small vines, it would look better if you gave it a darker color than that of the surrounding grass. and a different color than the trunk, something brown. just to add a bit more contrast.

other than that, there is nothing else i could possibly point out that needs improvement. great job! :)
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Urnam-BOT Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! Finally! An actual critique!
DragonsRAWR Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks. say, whatever happened to season 3? ;n; i wanted to rp with my favorite/biggest role-model artist ;)
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