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December 24, 2012
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:icondragonsrawr:
this is a dragon that is regaining her balance while in flight. she just saw something startling and had to regain her balance while in midair. the spikes on her head act as fur rising on a cat's back when scared or angry. or maybe a cockatoo.

please give constructive criticism. no "it's perfect" or "its terrible" give SPECIFIC feedback on what i can do better on.
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Critique by !DeadStickGuy Dec 24, 2012, 11:42:44 AM
I like how he def in the air. like hes runnin on it or something, the effect makin him appear to be in flight. His wings are good and big so he can carry the weight. Love his spiky spiny hair. He could use some scales but all gee. His expression, lookin up why? i dunno, think it make more sense to look down. More fire needed. He a great drag tho.

Remminds me of Marilyn Monroe if she were a lizard lol. anywayz great work, impressive, keep it up. hhear me roar!!! very cool drag ,man tys for lettin me take a look
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~Synusami Feb 17, 2013
I can't say this dragon is all too good in detail,but the position of it's body parts is very well done,i still prefer my dragons though,even if they're disproportionate a little.
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*DragonsRAWR Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah, proportion is my problem, especially with wolves. i wasn't going for much detail, though i do have trouble with that as well. thanks for the feedback, i appreciate it!
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*DragonsRAWR Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah i wasn't going to do shading. and muscle lines are my greatest challenge, so i left them out. i really wish i could though. thanks for the feedback! :)
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*ObsydianDragon Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very nice! maybe add some muscle lines, but other than that, very well done! oh, and shading, but that can be a challenge to some :}
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~Azorium Dec 24, 2012
I'm not much of a dragon drawer, so I can't give you any tips XD but I do think you did a great job!
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